Sarutobi (Arrancar)

Name:Unknown,Sarutobi

Age: H:21,HOllow:346

Visual Age:23

Gender: Male

Appearance: Sarutobi Wears the normal arrancar uniform but it has a huge hole at the back.
He has black normally spiked hair,it isnt very long but not very short.He has 2 diffrent eye colors 1 is blue the other is green.
Hes Zanpaktou is placed on his back.Sarutobi has dark black shoes what have small claws on the toe side.
He also has 2 rings each on a diffrent hand,one has a red emerald and the other has a purpel crystal.
~Height:5,7
~Other: He has a tatoo on his back where the uniforms hole is there is a word "muerte" in spanish it means Death.

Personality:Sarutobi is a tempered guy when someone is cocky to him than he gets really mad and starts raging around.
Also when he sees that someone is really weak like (s)he cant even stand up he just wont kill them because he hasnt done any damage to them.
but if the enemy has been beaten up by Sarutobi he will finish the fight!
He also likes to play whit hes enemy and he enjoys it and he has a huge help from his Resureccion.
He has never killed for fun,but he kills if he is ordered to kill.
He never fights whitout his Resureccion he only fights whit his resureccion because it gives him huge boosts and attacks.

Word Count:
120 words
608 characters

History/Background: Sarutobi was just graduated his school and he wanted to start a healty and new life,and he moved to the Karakura town,
he got a job as a banker he became very famous but on his 21´st birthday he made a party at his banbk but it was robbed and all of the party members were killed.But sarutobi was in the bathroom and when he got back he got nightmears for his enitre life because the way that the people were killed was horrible.Sarutobi went so insane that he started iginoring people,and once again he was robbed on a street and he ignored the robber and he got shot,he was brought to the hospital and was in a come for any weeks but than he died.

As a soul he wandered for only some days and was ambushed and devoured by some group of hollows.As hes hollow years he wasnt the ost stronger faster or anything he was lonely,he ate many souls and once even killed a Shinigami by accident.after that he started evolving to higer levels.
When he achived Menos size and form he started killing the other hollows and did it for the next 100 years.
AFter evolving to Adjuchas he was again ambushed by other adjuchas and hes mask was torn to half,he had so strong reiatsu burst that he killed the other hollows whit seconds.So he traveled and slowly took the form of a human whit a hollow mask hes hollow hole was placed on the right side of his chest.
As he walked and killed hollows and evolved to the form of arrancar he finally found himself ended up at the Las Noches Castle,he joined the other arrancars as a Fraccion of the Strongest espadas!
Word Count:
302 words
1544 characters

Innate Ability:Sarutobiust touch a random thing what is atleats as big as him and it turns light blue and Sarutobi can step in it,than he can come out where ever he wants.But he can use it only 5 times straight and the cooldown is really long.but it can open doors in bare air alsobut only to come out from there not enter!

RP Sample: *This is a required only for Elite applicants*

Skill Ranks: (Rank from 1 to 5 you specialties as an arrancar) Your choices for arrancar are Cero, sonido, hand to hand, weapon proficiency, Endurance.

1.Sonido
2.Weapon proficiency
3Cero.
4.Endurance
5.Hand To HAnd

I'd like to see some more detail in your history, as well as some attention to grammar and proper spelling. Some of your words are even missing letters, and it took me a moment to make sense of it.